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evelili · 1 year ago

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okay I’m reading the next chapter and this moment just happened (haven’t read past it yet) and what is WRONG with you???

The hallway rumbled as the final pieces of the floor crept up one after the other from the abyss. They rose at the same rate as the light that began to eat away at Rarity’s body, the same way it had consumed everything else she’d sacrificed.

The path forward was finally within reach. But in exchange not all of them could make it across.

A chill seeped into Twilight’s lungs—despair, she realized. It spread like frostbite through her veins, and as she struggled to draw breath filled with ice a single thought came crashing along with it:

They’ll miss her, won’t they?

LIKE. OH MY GOD. It was so terrifying the way you described Rarity and Twilight meeting each others gazes when they realized what she had to do and her making this choice and having to BE the symbol of generosity, but it being twisted into self sacrifice is SO fucked up and so so good

the best part of writing is taking all the pieces of me that are wrong and putting them on paper so other people get to be wrong too :)

#anyway i love rarity with my whole heart and she definitely did not deserve what i put her thru fkdfjslkdjfskdjf #this scene was really hard and really easy to write at the same time #hard bc i really struggled getting the tone right #i think i reworked the final few pages of the chapter a dozen times alone #but also easy bc i had a very very clear picture in my head of it #so i knew where i was going i just had to figure out the best way to get there yknow #my art #tte #twilight sparkle #rarity #mlp rarity #mlp fanfic #spoilers but who cares if thisll entice u to read the fic ill spoil the whole goddamn THING

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